first time commenting after I read the whole story in one night (yesterday night). First I was thinking.... Sleeping with ghosts? Nah, not another dbsk-member fucks ghost-story. But then, since it's placebo (my favorite band), I thought... Why not? Now I feel dumb for not reading it earlier!
Well, I love it. I love all the characterisations. They seem so real it's frightening. The angst... Oh, the angs is really getting to me (I'm not really in angst-mood but this was too good to pass up) All the beating around the bush had me almost smashing my head into the keyboard. But I guess... in a good way? (xD)
Your writing style is just the way I like it and hits all the right notes. And I really hope that the stuff this chapter revealed won't ruin my love for this because suicidal thoughts as a topic is really hard to describe in a story. The way I see it now it's really like Jaejoong wants to be saved by Yoochun, what with the lying in front of his door to be found and slitting his wrists in his bathroom, where he can just as easily be found. It's a little like he needs to get attention from Yoochun... by all means possible. That's how I see it... as a person experienced in that kind of things.
I wanted to write more but I'm too tired already.... (2 am here)
Again thank you for writing this, I'm really enjoying it.
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First I was thinking.... Sleeping with ghosts? Nah, not another dbsk-member fucks ghost-story.
But then, since it's placebo (my favorite band), I thought... Why not? Now I feel dumb for not reading it earlier!
Well, I love it. I love all the characterisations. They seem so real it's frightening. The angst... Oh, the angs is really getting to me (I'm not really in angst-mood but this was too good to pass up)
All the beating around the bush had me almost smashing my head into the keyboard. But I guess... in a good way? (xD)
Your writing style is just the way I like it and hits all the right notes.
And I really hope that the stuff this chapter revealed won't ruin my love for this because suicidal thoughts as a topic is really hard to describe in a story. The way I see it now it's really like Jaejoong wants to be saved by Yoochun, what with the lying in front of his door to be found and slitting his wrists in his bathroom, where he can just as easily be found. It's a little like he needs to get attention from Yoochun... by all means possible. That's how I see it... as a person experienced in that kind of things.
I wanted to write more but I'm too tired already.... (2 am here)
Again thank you for writing this, I'm really enjoying it.